Thursday, December 31, 2009
Books Read 2008
Talk Talk by T.C. Boyle
Link to Amazon: Talk Talk
The Irresistible Henry House by Lisa Grunwald
Link to Amazon: The Irresistible Henry House: A Novel
Thursday, December 10, 2009
Nicholas Nickleby by Charles Dickens
Link to Amazon: Nicholas Nickleby (Barnes & Noble Classics Series)
Wednesday, December 9, 2009
How Far to Bethlehem by Norah Lofts
Link to Amazon: HOW FAR To BETHLEHEM? A Novel.
Sunday, October 25, 2009
Hard Times by Charles Dickens
Link to Amazon: Hard Times (Barnes & Noble Classics)
Drood by Dan Simmons
- The Mystery of Edwin Drood by Charles Dickens
- David Copperfield by Charles Dickens (The semi-autobiographical novel)
- The Woman in White by Wilkie Collins
- Moonstone by Wilkie Collins
That should be enough to get you started. The narrator of Drood is Wilkie Collins, the contemporary of Dickens who was his friend and collaborator. Collins also had a problem with laudanum (opium), a plot point that figures prominently in Moonstone and Simmons Drood.
Dicken's Drood was unfinished, of course, and this novel is an entertaining attempt to explain the unfinished mystery of Dickens' novel by assuming that it was based on actual people and events in Dickens' life.
Drood is also massive. The edition that I read weighs in at ~770 pages, a size and heft that would make Dickens' and Collins' proud. By the time you read all the prerequisites for Drood you will have finished off almost three thousand pages. But the reading is so much fun, it's worth it.
Link to Amazon: Drood: A Novel
Thursday, October 15, 2009
Home by Marilynne Robinson
The novel deals with issues of morality and religion with sensitivity and understanding. This is a novel for thinking adults, for those with faith and without, for the hopeful and the hopeless.
Link to Amazon: Home: A Novel
Wednesday, September 30, 2009
Girl in a Blue Dress by Gaynor Arnold
This is an outstanding novel, a fictional examination of Dickens marriage and affair. Even the names are changed, and, as the author says in her introduction, events are rearranged to suit her narrative. But that's OK, in fact, it probably makes for a much better novel.
What's important is that it rings true and convincing, which is a testament to the author's skill. After finishing the novel, we can believe that it happened this way, and that we have had a glimpse of the real Charles Dickens.
It's not a flattering look at his personal life. The novel begins with his death, the the protagonist is his estranged wife. Dickens kicked her out of his home, denying her access to her children, ten years before he died, so that he could carry on an affair with an actress young enough to be his daughter. They didn't teach that in school when I was a kid - only recently have details emerged about Dickens personal life.
The author creates a convincing world for her fictional author, his wife, and his mistress. Highly recommended.
Link to Amazon: Girl in a Blue Dress: A Novel Inspired by the Life and Marriage of Charles Dickens
The Last Dickens by Matthew Pearl
Pearl chooses as a protagonist the publisher of Dickens novels in Boston. The seamier side of the publishing industry is revealed, at a time when there was no international copyright law and the theft of manuscripts was common. The plot involves the publisher traveling to England to search for the end of the unfinished novel. It is, of course, a little contrived, but entertaining. Flashbacks include Dickens last reading tour of America, and a glimpse of the English opium trade in India. Opium plays a large part in Dickens novel, so Pearl uses it to good advantage in his novel.
A "solution" to Dickens unfinished novel is proposed, one involving real characters that Dickens supposedly based his novel on. Overall it's a good read, probably the best of the Pearl literary mysteries.
Link to Amazon: The Last Dickens: A Novel
The Mystery of Edwin Drood by Charles Dickens
Actually, even though the novel is unfinished, it's a satisfying read. Edwin Drood disappears. He is a young, happy-go-lucky, man who was engaged in an arranged marriage. Just as Edwin and his fiance break off their engagement, he disappears. Public suspicion falls on a friend of his, another young man. But all clues tend to point to his uncle Jasper, who seems obsessed with Edwin's fiance. Jasper is also a secret opium addict, smoking it in the opening scene in a den in London.
No one knows where Dickens intended to take the novel. Is Edwin really dead? Or has he just disappeared because of the termination of his engagement? We'll never know, but that hasn't stopped other writers from speculating.
Link to Amazon: The Mystery of Edwin Drood (Penguin Classics)
Thursday, August 27, 2009
Sometimes we're always real same-same by Mattox Roesch
Cesar is an unlikely choice for a protagonist. It's tough to be sympathetic to a gang-banger, especially when we learn that he earned that label by participating in a gang-style rape. It's not clear if he actually raped the girl or if he just assisted, but it adversely affected my opinion of the character. Near the end of the novel, Cesar attempts to rationalize his part in the rape by claiming that everyone is guilty of something, an argument that seems immature at best:
And here we all are, standing on this ground. Sure,none of these people have ever participated in a gang rape. None of them have ever seen anything so ugly. But in a way, they have. In a way, every person here has raped someone. Every person in the world has raped someone.
The character of Go-Boy steals the novel. He is a perpetual optimist with his own odd mix of religious beliefs. It is inevitable that his optimism will crash in the face of repeated real-life failures, and that crash forms the real climax of the book. It is Go-Boy's journey that is more compelling and interesting, and his character that is more sympathetic. We see Go-Boy's struggle through Cesar's eyes, and Cesar learns much from Go-Boy.
An interesting novel, giving the reader a glimpse of modern eskimo culture that few will ever see.
Link to Amazon: Sometimes We're Always Real Same-Same
Friday, August 21, 2009
Blood Meridian by Cormac McCarthy
McCarthy's war novel. Not war between nations but the more elemental and basic desire of man to war on his fellow creatures to advance himself.
At times it reads like a heroic epic poem, at times like a biblical chronicle. There are no heroes here - the characters give free reign to their basest cravings and desires. Violence is ubiquitous. The central character - the kid, is curiously minimized. He appears at the beginning, and again at the end, but in the majority of the novel, as the hideous exploits of the roving warriors are told, the kid is curiously absent from the narrative. We know he is there, that he takes part, but we are not seeing the action through his eyes or even getting his reactions to what happens. In a sense he is everyman, or any man, caught up as a teenager in the war.
The character of the judge is the god of war. He is ruthlessly self-centered. Nothing exists that he does not destroy. He controls and manipulates everyone that he meets.
An unsettling read - grit your teeth and bear it.
Link to Amazon: Blood Meridian: Or the Evening Redness in the West
Life Portraits - Rejection
The tally of queries and rejections for 2009 are:
I sent out 56 queries.
I got 26 rejections.
I got an astounding 30 "no response means no". In other words, 30 agents couldn't even be bothered to respond to my query with a simple no.
This is pretty discouraging for a novel that finished in the finals of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. Here's the Publisher's Weekly review that I received as part of the contest:
When a woman inherits a series of nude photographs of an unknown man, it triggers a search for the truth behind her dead mother’s mysterious history in this superb novel. Shifting back and forth between the present and the past, with portraits both metaphorical and literal, the parallels between the lives and personalities of young mother Sally Swain and her own newly-deceased mother, photographer Eva, come into detailed focus. Sally’s search draws her into a quest for her unknown father’s identity as Eva’s tale moves from the 1950s to the 1970s amid the drama of the Civil Rights movement and explores her relationships with two very different men: doctor and budding politician Paul James, and confused, often-depressed artist Isaac Rutherford. The suspense is maintained masterfully throughout, and Sally’s slow maturation as she learns the lessons of the past is handled gently and effectively. Paul, Isaac and their family members are richly portrayed with a complex and realistic balance of virtues and flaws as Sally slowly unravels Eva’s secrets and resolves her own personal challenges in the deeply satisfying conclusion.
What now? I suppose I'll keep plugging away at it. This is not my only novel, of course. I have another that is completed and yet another in progress. But I can't pretend that I am not disappointed.
Friday, August 14, 2009
Child of God by Cormac McCarthy
This is the story of Lester Ballard's descent into hell. Ballard is a piece of work, a real child of god. McCarthy tells it in stark and simple prose with black humor. Ballard, with the cunning of all men, learns to take advantage of his situation, preying, like the "Son of Sam" murderer, on lovers parked in cars along lonely mountain roads. In his depravity, Ballard takes advantage of the dead female bodies.
No one can tell stories of this kind better that Cormac McCarthy. After reading it I felt depressed and blue for days, wary that a sadistic god would laugh when I was struck down by some depraved child of god.
Link to Amazon: Child of God
Outer Dark by Cormac McCarthy
Set in the mythical southern Appalachia of Faulkner, this novel is sparse and stark. It follows an incestuous brother and sister. She bears his child; he abandons it to the elements. The baby is taken by a passing tinker. She sets out to find the baby. The brother sets out to find her. Along the way they encounter good and evil in many forms. Look for no happy ending here.
Link to Amazon: Outer Dark
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
A Romance on Three Legs by Katie Hafner
The characters make this creative non-fiction book about Glenn Gould's search for the perfect piano. There is Gould himself, of course. The author does not make a judgment about his mental health, letting his actions speak to the reader. Think the character of the detective Adrian Monk from the popular TV series. To me Gould seems to have obsessive-compulsive character disorder as well as being borderline autistic.
Gould could not find a perfect piano with a piano tuner-technician to keep it perfect, and that character is the practically blind piano tuner Verne Edquist. Edquist's story is, to me, as fascinating as Gould's. Raised on a poor farm in Saskatchewan, he was forced to attend a school for the blind where he learned the rudiments of his trade, working his way up through the ranks of piano tuners to become the best.
The third major character of the book is the piano itself, one of the few Steinways manufactured during the war years when the factory was re-tooled for the war effort. That it was constructed at all seems a miracle. Gould found it languishing in a department store in Canada. He was looking for a super-light action and a clean sound, and it was Edquist that brought that sound out of the piano.
A lot of fascinating details are also revealed about the Steinway Artist program as it existed after the Second World War. Once an artist signed an exclusive contract with Steinway they were supplied with pianos and even piano tuners when they toured.
Unfortunately, shipping Gould's Steinway led to the end of it's useful life, at least for Gould. It was dropped five feet on a loading dock and the plate was cracked. After it was rebuilt, even Edquist was unable to get it back to the pre-accident condition that Gould obsessively desired.
This is a non-fiction book, so the facts get in the way of a happy ending, but it's still a fascinating account of two interesting men and the piano they shared.
Link to Amazon: A Romance on Three Legs: Glenn Gould's Obsessive Quest for the Perfect Piano
The Art of Practicing by Madeline Bruser
A very useful guide to practising a musical instrument, with tips on everything from physical to mental preparedness. Some of the advice is evident and common sense, some is unexpected.
Link to Amazon: The Art of Practicing: A Guide to Making Music from the Heart
Tuesday, August 4, 2009
The Poe Shadow by Matthew Pearl
I did not care for this at all. I have also read The Dante Club by the same author. He's carved a little niche for himself, writing novels with a literary tie-in.
It's worth examining in detail just to understand what bothers me about the novel - so I don't commit the same errors.
The protagonist is an idiot for most of the novel. Naive and bungling, yet unbelievably lucky. Not convincing that he would abandon everything to find out the truth about Poe's death. Mystery novels have a long history of the dumb sidekick, but in those cases the sidekick is not the focus of the novel - the detective is. It's not the mysteries of Dr. Watson, it's the mysteries of Sherlock Holmes. In this case neither of the detectives grab the readers imagination, leaving us with this idiot for a protagonist.
Too close to the truth, which, in this case, is boring. I realize the author did a lot of research into Poe's death so that he could wrap his novel around fact. It's boring. You see a mystery about the death of Poe on the bookstore shelf and what springs to mind? Something macabre, something obsessed with being buried alive, something dark and gloomy and fantastic. Instead we get a not-very-cohesive story about Poe being overcome by a single drink of alcohol and spurned by his friends. It's supposed to be fiction, OK? No one expects the truth. It should be a story worthy of the man who wrote The Cask of Amontillado and The Fall of the House of Usher.
The writing style, while it might be appropriate for a novel of the period, is too cumbersome and long-winded for a modern novel with modern readers. There are plenty of examples of historical novels written in a compelling and captivating manner. March and The Year of the Plague by Geraldine Brooks are good examples.
So I didn't like it. Will I read another novel by Pearl? Probably, with the hope that he improves.
Link to Amazon: THE POE SHADOW
No Country for Old Men by Cormac McCarthy
My understanding of the construction of the novel is that McCarthy took the novel apart, separated it into two parts, and put it back together. The compelling part is a linear telling of the story of the stolen money and the chase. In this part the writing is restricted to only what can be seen, heard, touched, tasted, smelled - the senses. There are no reflections by the characters, no feelings, no rhetorical questions, and no flashbacks. Essentially all of that has been removed and placed in the other part of the novel, in which the character of the Sheriff addresses the reader. There is no action in this part, only a discussion by the Sheriff in first person of his life as a sheriff and his feelings about what he has observed. The two parts alternate, with the Sheriffs first person musings in italics.
It works, very well. Makes me want to try to imitate it.
Link to Amazon: No Country for Old Men
Friday, July 24, 2009
The Loser by Thomas Bernhard
I don't have much sympathy with the narrator, of course. I am an amateur musician and writer. Should I give up playing the piano because I am not Glenn Gould? Should I give up writing because I can't get published? I know one thing - I gave up on reading this book.
Link to Amazon: The Loser: A Novel
Thursday, July 23, 2009
An Equal Music by Vikram Seth
There is a surprising plot twist here, which I will not reveal, since to do so would spoil the surprise and the book for the reader. But the twist does bring up some interesting moral questions. To what lengths would you go to play the music that you love with the person that you love? Would you risk your own career? Would you risk the careers and reputations of your friends and colleagues?
The decisions made by Michael are interesting to question and debate, something that would make this a good book club selection. His character is, for me, too self-centered and indecisive, although the author does an entirely convincing job portraying Michael's character.
The descriptions of the music and the musicians ring true, and musicians of any instrument or style of music should find the book an interesting and enjoyable read.
Link to Amazon: An Equal Music: A Novel
Body and Soul by Frank Conroy
In a lucky break (one of many in the novel) Claude befriends a music store owner down the street who recognizes the young boys talent and gives him his first piano lessons. Only later do we find out he music store owner is a Polish refugee who also happens to have been the premier composer of his generation. The lucky breaks continue for Claude throughout his career, as he makes friends with people who can teach and help him.
Readers who have shared the experience of piano lessons as a child or teenager will find much to identify with. Readers who are musicians on any instrument will recognize their own struggles in Claude's journey.
Only after some emotional stress enters Claude's life, and his too-easy road becomes uncertain does his music really soar. Several small mysteries keep the novel moving forward. Who is Claude's unknown father? What will happen to his mother and his old friend, his first piano teacher. Will he find love?
The novel is a complete package, a very satisfying read, and an accurate portrait of a young musician. I highly recommend it.
Link to Amazon: Body and Soul
Tuesday, July 14, 2009
The Piano Tuner by Daniel Mason
The novel owes much to Conrad's Heart of Darkness. Is the surgeon deep in the jungle of Burma merely an influential doctor, or has he gone native? Is he working in the best interest of the British Empire, or does he have other plans? And why is a piano so important? Drake's journey is eye-opening as he encounters a culture that he never imagined could exist. He falls under the spell of Burma as well as the eccentric surgeon who has brought him to tune his piano. Of course things get out of hand - Drake has to repair damage to the piano from a bullet.
The writing is good, although at times the author abandons traditional dialogue punctuation in favor of a style that is confusing at best - he would have been well-advised to stick to traditional punctuation at all times.
Here is the climatic moment when Drake finally arrives at the location of the piano:
Edgar climbed out of the boat.
The man looked at him without speaking. The piano tuner's clothes were still soaked with mud, his hair matted against his forehead. He could feel the dried mud on his face crack as he smiled. There was a long silence and then he slowly raised his hand.
He had thought about this moment for weeks, and about what he would say. The moment called for words fit for History, to be remembered and recorded once the Shan States were finally won and the Empire secured.
"I am Edgar Drake," he said. "I am here to repair a piano."
Yes, it seems a little overblown and melodramatic when quoted. I admit that I laughed when I read that passage. The plot is, for the most part, predictable. The ending (which I will not reveal) may be disappointing to some.
And how is the depiction of the actual piano tuning? Spotty. I have had some experience in this area, in the moving, tuning, and repair of pianos. It seems that the Erard grand was transported across Burma without removing the legs - not likely. The piano tuner is called on to perform, and is able to play multiple preludes and fugues from Bach's Well Tempered Clavier without much, if any, preparation. I find that hard to believe for even a professional pianist. The descriptions of the actual tuning of the piano are also not technically accurate, at least not consistent with modern practice. But this is fiction, and we should give the author, whose training is in medicine, the benefit of the doubt.
Overall I give it two and a half stars out of five. It's a good effort, and where else can you read a book where a piano tuner is the principal character?
Link to Amazon: The Piano Tuner: A Novel
Friday, July 10, 2009
Clara by Janice Galloway
A fictional account of the real-life character Clara Wieck Schumann, her father Friedrich Wieck, and her husband Robert Schumann. Clara's life is told from her earliest memories, through her training by her father as a concert pianist, her forbidden courtship with Robert, her troubled marriage, and Robert's confinement and death. This is not a happy story, something that is obvious from the very beginning. Clara's father is strict and overbearing, and treats her as property to be exploited. She is a gifted pianist, and begins touring (with her father) in her early teenage years. Clara's skill makes her father famous as a teacher, and Robert Schumann (nine years older than Clara) becomes a student. The inevitable happens when Clara and Robert fall in love.
Even at this early stage, Robert's instability is made obvious by the author. The marriage is forbidden by Friedrich, and Robert and Clara have to resort to appealing to the courts for permission to marry, which happens once Clara comes of age. The marriage is troubled from the start. The author portrays Robert as suffering from alternating periods of manic and melancholic states. Clara is perpetually pregnant, and forced to tour to support the family. She compares the difficulty of living with Robert to walking on eggshells.
This is fiction, of course, but based largely on fact. The edition I read (ISBN: 0743238532) includes an interview with the author in which she states that she was as accurate as she could be without being slavish. The tone throughout, in my opinion, is one of quiet desperation. We are always waiting for the next crisis in Robert's life. The author's style heightens the feeling of anxiety.
Clara suffers terribly from her father and from Robert, but there are moments when she is happy, although there is always the threat of disaster looming. All the famous musicians of the time make an appearance in the novel: Paganini, Liszt, Mendelsohn, and the young Brahms. The author is not a musician, but I could not tell it from the writing - she does an excellent job.
Here is the young Friendrich, describing his fascination for the piano:
... God wanted Friedrich for the piano. What else explained his fascination, his feeling of kinship for the instrument? Something about its hamstrung innards, its rickle of ivory slats, kept drawing him almost against his will. Dependent and tyrannical, willing and resistant, the piano soothed and irritated in equal measure. You could spend your life trying to tame the brute, coaxing it, pursuing its relentless demand for mastery. What music it could make: and orchestra in a box! It was peerless. Yet it was nothing, no more than a stranded whale, without a human operative. Without him.
And here is Clara, thinking about the manuscript for Schumann's piano concerto:
... Even the look of it thrilled her: the bar lines looped over and skirted and duped for melody's sake, effects that could be seen only on the page, not heard in their full subtlety at all. It was clever and beautiful, but it was more that that. It was proof. Proof that sheer effort of will could construct a wholeness where none existed. Proof that music and those who made it could confront chaos, and find in it what was tender and fantastical and clear and true. And this was her purpose: to play such music; music that made everything, everything, come through.
Reading the novel put me in my own melancholic state for days. Isn't that what we desire from good literature? That it is so convincing and real that we are lost in the story? Thankfully we have Clara's legacy as a concert pianist and Robert's music to keep their memories alive - and this excellent novel.
Link to Amazon: Clara: A Novel
Wednesday, July 8, 2009
The Secret History by Donna Tartt
But the author's portrait is intriguing. She looks serious and defiant, her arms crossed in front of her, her head tilted slightly to the side, an slight, enigmatic smile on her face. Penetrating dark eyes, dark hair, and a very pale face. I can imagine her seeing through all deceptions to the truth within. Very much like her writing.
Link to Amazon: The Secret History
Monday, July 6, 2009
Moonstone by Wilkie Collins
The first detective mystery novel? Yes, and still one of the best. Wilkie Collins was a contemporary of Charles Dickens. This novel has all the aspects of a good mystery. Interesting plot (the moonstone is a stolen diamond), a series of interesting characters, blind alleys, red herrings, unexpected twists and turns, and so on and so forth.
It's told in an interesting way - first person serial. Each character tells their part of the story from the first person perspective. This is a seldom-used method of writing the novel, later to be made famous by William Faulkner in As I Lay Dying.
The only thing that is a little dated is the presence of opium in the plot - understandable since Collins was an addict. I suppose he was writing from personal experience. The treatment of opium seems naive, but what can you expect from the nineteenth century.
Highly recommended, and much more readable than some of the Dickens' novels.
Link to Amazon: The Moonstone (Modern Library Classics)
Thursday, June 18, 2009
Beat by Amy Boaz
Ninety-five percent of this book is about the unlikeable Frances and her affair with her creepy poet. The other five percent is what kept me reading - the unanswered questions. Is her lover in jail? Why is he in jail? What happened to her lover's lover? Is her lover cheating on her? Why did Frances flee to Paris? And please, please can Frances be punished for the suffering she is causing the reader?
Ultimately it all fizzles at the end. We don't really know the answers to the questions because Frances is telling the story and she is so confused she doesn't know herself what happened. The only good thing is that the novel is less than two-hundred pages long - the pain is over quickly.
Link to Amazon: Beat
Monday, June 15, 2009
The Woman in White by Wilkie Collins
This novel is described as the first of the English "sensation novels", what we would call in the U.S. a thriller. If Collins invented this format he was a genius. This novel has the elements we identify with a thriller. Its only weak points are its treatment of women as a somewhat helpless and inferior species, but I could easily say the same thing of Dickens. Even though one of the female characters (Marian) is instrumental in thwarting the plot Count Fosco (what a name for a villain) it is left to the male character to actually resolve things.
But it's a great read, actually a lot more approachable than some of the Dicken's novels. I wish that, as a high school junior, I had been given this to read instead of "A Tale of Two Cities".
Link to Amazon: The Woman in White (Modern Library Classics)
Monday, June 8, 2009
The Thirteenth Tale by Diane Setterfield
Margaret Lea is hired to wite the biography of best-selling author Vida Winter. Winter has made a habit of telling widely different tales of her life to interviewers, but now she is dying, and wants to tell her true story. She picks Margaret Lea to tell it to, a reclusive bookstore clerk who is herself emotionally damaged.
The tale takes many emotional twists and is full of revelations about the past. Winter was a twin - or was she? Her twin is dead - or is she?
I was disappointed when I finished the book to find that Setterfield has not yet written another novel. More! I want more!
Link to Amazon: The Thirteenth Tale: A Novel
The Dante Club by Matthew Pearl
But I think the author has real problems with the omniscient narration. I am not an inexperienced reader, and I had difficulty following the thread of the narration at times, especially when exciting events were taking place. It is not always clear whose eyes we are viewing a scene through, or even what is actually happening.
It's still an entertaining read though, and the literary allusions are very well done.
Link to Amazon: The Dante Club: A Novel
Thursday, May 21, 2009
Adventures of Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain
Link to Amazon: Adventures of Huckleberry Finn (Dover Thrift Editions)
The Well and the Mine by Gin Philipps
It may be just a tad too nostalgic. There's a minimal plot and excellent characterization but quite a lot of what I would call nostalgia for 1930s Alabama.
Link to Amazon: The Well and the Mine
Wednesday, May 13, 2009
What Maisie Knew by Henry James
Link to Amazon: What Maisie Knew (Penguin Classics)
Thursday, May 7, 2009
Time to Regroup - Yet Again
Depression set in quickly. It's difficult not to be hopeful and enthusiastic. I made it to the final 100 entries out of 10,000. I had an all-positive Publishers Weekly review - it was effusive in its praise with nothing negative to say. So I got my hopes up. I had a better chance of geting into the top three of ABNA than of winning the lottery.
But it's not to be. Now what? Time to regroup - yet again. I have regrouped so many times after disappointments that I feel like a veteran of strange and foreign wars. Typically the depression doesn't last that long, though. If I were really depressed I wouldn't be writing this - and the act of typing out my thoughts does help. It's not like I base my whole existence on whether I can get published or not. My value as a human being is not determined by whether you can buy my novel in a bookstore.
I will rework my query letter, including the news about ABNA and my PW review. I'll search out more agents to send it to. I'll look through the short stories again and send some more of them out to literary journals. And I'll continue to work on the next novel. Of course, I have another couple of novels that are in the drawer, so to speak, and that is probably where they will remain for the time being.
Always at the back of my mind lurks the fear that I may never get published. I may never attract the attention of an agent or an editor or a publisher. So be it, but it won't be because I didn't try.
The Book of Air and Shadows by Michael Gruber
That's not to say that I didn't see the ending coming. In fact, the plot follows the well worn path of countless thrillers before it. We have the search for a Maguffin, the double and triple cross, the unsuspected villain, the clueless narrator, the chase scene, and so forth and so on. But it's great fun and a wonderful read.
Link to Amazon: The Book of Air and Shadows: A Novel
Friday, May 1, 2009
Tag Cloud of Life Portraits
Here is the tag cloud for my novel Life Portraits. The names of the characters and several themes of the novel are prominent.
Sunday, April 26, 2009
The Name of the Rose by Umberto Eco
Interesting that he describes the first hundred pages as a penance or initiation for reading the novel. I found myself skimming much of the historical facts about the sects and heretics. Is all that detail really necessary? Isn't it enough to know the facts without so much detail? I would certainly cut a lot.
And it seems that the author added the extra levels of narrator (a modern translator at least twice removed from the young novice narrator) as a salve to his own ego. Odd.
But at it's core, there is the traditional detective novel, much like a story of Sherlock Holmes narrated by Doctor Watson. William of Baskerville is the "detective" and everything is narrated by the novice Adso.
Much of the extra material valued so highly by Eco was, of course, removed for the movie.
Link to Amazon: The Name of the Rose: including the Author's Postscript
Tuesday, April 21, 2009
The Life of Emily Dickinson by Richard Sewall
It will shatter your belief in the many myths of Dickinson's life. Much is still open to debate, but after reading this biography I believe that Dikinson was not a recluse because she lost a lover or was subjugated by her father. It was what we would call today a lifestyle choice, brought on by her decision to be a poet and the lack of any life-changing occurrence when she was of marrying age.
Link to Amazon: The Life of Emily Dickinson
Publishers Weekly Review of Life Portraits
From Publishers Weekly
When a woman inherits a series of nude photographs of an unknown man, it triggers a search for the truth behind her dead mother’s mysterious history in this superb novel. Shifting back and forth between the present and the past, with portraits both metaphorical and literal, the parallels between the lives and personalities of young mother Sally Swain and her own newly-deceased mother, photographer Eva, come into detailed focus. Sally’s search draws her into a quest for her unknown father’s identity as Eva’s tale moves from the 1950s to the 1970s amid the drama of the Civil Rights movement and explores her relationships with two very different men: doctor and budding politician Paul James, and confused, often-depressed artist Isaac Rutherford. The suspense is maintained masterfully throughout, and Sally’s slow maturation as she learns the lessons of the past is handled gently and effectively. Paul, Isaac and their family members are richly portrayed with a complex and realistic balance of virtues and flaws as Sally slowly unravels Eva’s secrets and resolves her own personal challenges in the deeply satisfying conclusion.
Pardon me for excerpting the high points:
"... superb novel."
"... suspense is maintained masterfully ..."
"... handled gently and effectively."
"... richly portrayed ..."
"... complex and realistic ..."
"... deeply satisfying conclusion."
You can read my entry. Comments are welcome.
Thursday, April 16, 2009
Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award - semifinalist!
You can read and review my excerpt. Please. I gladly accept all feedback, good or bad.
The next hurdle is the elimination to only three finalists. There are some excellent entries, so I'm not exactly optimistic about my chances. I should know by May 15th.
I will also be receiving a review of my entire novel from Publishers Weekly.
Agents - unnecessary intermediaries?
She's not fond of literary agents, the gatekeepers between writers and publishers.
Here's the comment I left on her blog:
Speaking from an economics viewpoint, agents are intermediaries in a supply chain. The traditional supply chain is supplier-manufacturer-wholesaler-retailer-buyer.
As I see it, the writer is the supplier, the publisher and the writer working together are the manufacturer. The publisher is the wholesaler, bookstores are the retailers, and readers are the buyers. Intermediaries (agents) are not really necessary in the supply chain. History is full of examples of intermediaries (middlemen) that have been eliminated. You might say that is the natural evolution of the supply chain - to eliminate middlemen.
Recent history is also full of examples of other steps in the supply chain being eliminated or consolidated. Direct marketing via the internet is one example, with Amazon attempting to bypass bookstores.
No one should be surprised if the publishing industry undergoes some radical change as well. What that change will be I cannot guess - I wish I could. There are plenty of ongoing experiments - most of which are designed to eliminate intermediaries such as agents, or even publishers and bookstores. Only time will tell which experiments will succeed and which will fail.
Saturday, April 11, 2009
The Drowning Tree by Carol Goodman
Link to Amazon: The Drowning Tree: A Novel
Sunday, April 5, 2009
Human Croquet by Kate Atkinson
And yet it all works somehow. Let me be honest - I love the writing style of Kate Atkinson. She could write a grocery list and I would read it. Her style really resonates with me, and I thoroughly enjoyed this queer book, strange plot twists and all.
Link to Amazon: Human Croquet
Saturday, March 28, 2009
Emotionally Weird by Kate Atkinson
Essentially plotless, there is ample opportunity for Atkinson to display her quirky sense of humor. I love her humor and her writing. This novel is not as good as her first novel, Behind the Scenes at the Museum, and very different from her murder mysteries, but worth a read.
Link to Amazon: Emotionally Weird
Friday, March 20, 2009
The Lake of Dead Languages by Carol Goodkind
The plot revolves around a series of mysterious suicides of two generations of students. Or are they suicides? The plot is convoluted and complicated, but that is part of the charm of this novel. I highly recommend it.
Link to Amazon: The Lake of Dead Languages
Tuesday, March 17, 2009
Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award - Quarterfinalist!
The two reviews I received from Amazon were positive. Here are the reviews and the "pitch" for the novel:
Review
I couldn't possibly count the number of novels, poems, autobiographies, paintings and songs which were inspired by the fact that the author felt like they never really knew their own parents. It's a bug question, this one of identity. And how can we possibly know who we are if we never knew where we came from in the first place. It may be an over done idea but the premise behind "Life Portraits" that I picked up from reading the snippet, is a very valid one that leaves a lot of room to play around in. We never really realize it because we spend so much time looking for information that is sensational but people are fascinating. Really they are. Everyone has a story that is amazing and deserves to be told. And so these novels keep popping up, the stories of those we never really got to know and no they're dying maybe or dead and there's all this unfinished business....no, the premise for this isn't very original. But it's written well and the little I read gave me enough mental questions about the characters introduced that if I had the whole thing in front of me I'd probably read on.
Review
This excerpt from "Life Portraits" is especially interesting to me because of the historical references to Atlanta, where I grew up during the same time as Eva would have been there. Incidents Eva, Sally's mother, photographed such as Lester Maddox blocking blacks from his restaurant with an axe-handle in the door were events I lived through and my family talked about, so this makes the portraits literally jump off the page for me. It is the rare writer who can evoke a strong sense of smell from me when I'm reading, twice removed from the experience being described, but this writer did. I can smell those sharp, acrid darkroom chemicals, and that smell completely pulls me into the story in a way that simple visual imaginings cannot do. I can still smell it, half an hour after reading it. The choice of photographs as a means of telling the story--photographs that I imagine mostly in black and white, as a serious newspaper or war photographer might shoot them--is an intriguing hook; a means of opening up a world of secrets and buried history, like the hidden nudes in Eva's locked cabinet drawer. The writing itself is quite good. I enjoy the textures of complex sentences and layered imagery, so this is a writer whose skill commands my interest in the writer as well as the story--much as I am interested in following an excellent actor's career through and transcending the characters he or she plays. Of course, I am curious to know whether Sally's inheritance is scant or somehow deliberately hurtful because of her rift with her mother--it is not money or property, after all--or (as I suspect through the foreshadowing) the greatest treasure a complex woman has to leave a daughter she deeply loved and lost.
Product Description
Imagine Sally Swain's surprise when she inherits from her mother twenty years of nude photographs of a strange man, all taken before Sally was born. Life Portraits tells the story of Eva Swain, photographer, and Isaac Rutherford, painter, as they carry out a twenty-year art project, beginning in 1955, to meet once a year and record each other's portraits. Life Portraits also tells the story of Sally, who left home at seventeen and returned fourteen years later, a single mother, in time for her mother Eva's funeral, to discover that Eva had lied to her about her father. She sets out to solve the mystery surrounding the nude portraits and find the identity of her father, and along the way discovers that she is her mother's daughter. What she learns forces her to examine her relationship with her own daughter - and her daughter's father. Part mystery and part love story, Life Portraits should appeal to readers that love complex characters and family sagas. The story of the twenty-year-long art project is original and captivating, and is spun out in alternating scenes with Sally's search for the mysterious man in the portraits.
Judging is based in part on customer reviews, so if you like what you read in my excerpt, please write a short review for me. Juding for the semifinals is over on April 15th.
Friday, March 13, 2009
When Will There be Good News by Kate Atkinson
I loved the character of Reggie, the sixteen-year-old Scottish girl who wisecracked her way through the novel, doggedly turning up in the right places at the right time, saving more than one life by her actions. Well done by author and character.
It's a great read - give it a try.
Link to Amazon: When Will There Be Good News?: A Novel
Saturday, March 7, 2009
American Rust by Philipp Meyer
Meyer does an excellent job examining the motives and passions of his characters. Each is faced with difficult decisions, each acts according to their wants and desires. The young men each have their chance to escape, and each fails to take advantage of their opportunities.
The author is also successful in bringing the novel to a close satisfactorily, something that can be difficult to do in character-based literary fiction. The ending is dark and sombre, but satisfying.
If I had a complaint it would be with the two female characters - they both seem to find sex the only way to relate to the men in their lives.
Overall it is well worth reading, even though it is dark and depressing.
Link to Amazon: American Rust: A Novel
Monday, March 2, 2009
One Good Turn by Kate Atkinson
Case Histories is a great book. One Good Turn is a good book. This book is about coincidences. As the protagonist says, "A coincidence is just an explanation waiting to happen." There are plenty to characters all linked by coincidences, with what I'm beginning to recognize as Atkinson's trademark style of tying everything together in unexpected ways.
It's a good read - not as great as Case Histories, but still well worth it.
Link to Amazon: One Good Turn: A Novel
Tuesday, February 24, 2009
Rejection X 20 = depression
I've been writing seriously for five years now, and what do I have to show for it? One short story published, in an online literary journal. I have written six novels, of which four are "starter" novels that will never be seen by an agent or editor. Two of the novels I am proud of, BtC and LP. I am told this is a very bad time to try to get an agent's attention, so maybe I could take some consolation from that, but twenty rejections for LP is tough to take.
What do I do now? Where do I go from here? I entered LP in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award, but I don't have much hope for it - the initial judging is based only on a pitch. I have ideas for four more novels that I have worked on a little. I suppose I will continue to be optimistic and plug away at another novel, probably the one codenamed LL. At this point I have gotten used to writing and creating - I miss it when I am depressed and not writing.
The prospect of never being published is frightening and sobering. It is a very real possibility. Book sales were declining, even before the current financial downturn. And perhaps I am just not good enough. Maybe I will never attract the attention of one of the gatekeepers (the agents) no matter how well I write. It takes a great deal of determination to keep plugging away at it in the face of so much rejection.
Monday, February 23, 2009
Behind the Scenes at the Museum by Kate Atkinson
Ruby narrates her own conception, and the story gets weirder and sadder from there. Atkinson breaks all the rules and gets away with it, which is what good writing is all about. Not only does Ruby narrate her conception, but we are filled in on the lives of her ancestors in chapter-sized footnotes. Obviously things that Ruby could never know, but the reader doesn't care. It's good writing and it works.
There is even a mystery too, which is what you would expect from Atkinson. The solution is revealed in the climax.
Link to Amazon: Behind the Scenes at the Museum: A Novel
Wednesday, February 18, 2009
Loving Frank by Nancy Horan
The ending is the most interesting part of the book. The rest of it is familiar to modern readers. Both Frank and Mamah are married to other people - they both have children. Their affair goes through the familiar pattern of infatuation, love, deception, estrangement from the children, hurting others by selfish actions, shame, guilt, and so forth and so on. This all takes place around 1909, so there was quite a scandal, something that would not really happen today.
If there were solely a novel, the ending would be dismissed, I think, as too sudden and melodramatic. There is certainly not enough foreshadowing of what happens. But since this is fiction based on fact, you can't really argue "that couldn't happen", since it did happen. It's one of the common "rules" presented to fiction writers. Just because something happened that way does not mean that it makes a good story.
So now you will have to read it, to find out what I am talking about and to decide for yourself if the true-life ending makes a satisfying and compelling story.
Sunday, February 15, 2009
Piano World online recital
Friday, February 13, 2009
The Road to Wellville by T. C. Boyle
The novel's dark humor is its most striking aspect. The descriptions of the medical treatments, the enemas, the food at the sanitarium, the lectures by Kellogg, the odd characters who were drawn to the treatments, read like an odd mixture of Faulkner and Dickens. And it has plot! We follow the Will Lightbody and his wife Eleanor on the road to Wellville, along with an assortment of minor characters and subplots. Highly inventive and a great read.
Tuesday, February 3, 2009
Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil by John Berendt
Case Histories by Kate Atkinson
Sunday, February 1, 2009
Piano Lessons have begun
How long will I take lessons? I don't know. It is satisfying a need that I have to express myself, and I'm having fun with it. So, if you are brave, have a listen.
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Tuesday, January 27, 2009
The Good Thief by Hannah Tinti
There is plenty of violence here, graphically described. There is so much that it is somewhat cheapened, like watching a violent movie where everybody gets shot - who cares after a while? It's a great story though, full of little twists and turns, and a great read.
Friday, January 23, 2009
Someone to Love by Jude Deveraux
Who invented this genre anway? I've never read one, but the formula is evident from this novel. There's no explicit sex - there are descriptions of heaving chests and six-pack abs, but that's about as far as it goes. The ghosts (the paranormal part) mean no harm - they are misunderstood, and want something, but they don't steal souls and frighten to death. The dialog is corny and unrealistic - sort of a teenagers dream of what romantic dialog might be. The plot is full of holes, but who cares? The fans don't read these novels for the plot, but to feel good about the romance. The characters are improbable - filthy rich man who is also young and gorgeous, greiving over the death of his fiance. Beautiful and succesful TV journalist, veteran of war zones, who faints at the sight of a ghost.
But Deveraux is highly successful with these. She has the right touch, obviously, and she gives her readers what they want.
Thursday, January 22, 2009
Silence by Christopher Brookhouse
It's the story of a High School senior, Nicki, who runs away a few days before graduation. It's also the story of her parents and friends in a small town in New Hampshire. The writing is good, but there are some awkward moments, in dialog and narrative. It's wonderful that this small press has published this book though - it would have a hard time getting any attention from a large publisher.
Monday, January 19, 2009
Little, Big by John Crowley
Improve Your Piano Playing by Dr. John Meffen
Playing the Piano for Pleasure by Charles Cooke
Sunday, January 4, 2009
Books Read 2008
Books Read - 2008
Once again, primarily novels and almost all literary fiction. The exceptions are books that my book club selected, civil war books, poetry, and books on musical topics.